Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下面表格内容，以The changes in my hometown 为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你家乡的变化。题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

过去	街道很脏；街道两旁的树木很少；大多数人步行上学或上班；河水很干净；空气很新鲜
现在	街道既干净又宽阔；街道两旁有很多树和花；车辆多，许多人有自己的车，外出非常方便；污染严重

The changes in my hometown

Great changes have taken place in my hometown. _________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. There were few trees beside the roads. People went to work or school on foot. But now, the streets are clean and wide . The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many trees and beautiful flowers beiside the roads. Many buses and taxis pass there. A lot of people have their own cars. People usually go to work by bus or by car. But the environment is not as good as before.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.I hope my hometown will be better and better.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍家乡的变化。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如But now, the streets are clean and wide . The river is clean and the water is clear. There are many trees and beautiful flowers beiside the roads. Many buses and taxis pass there.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。