Question

请以The Changes to My Hometown为题。根据中文提示，写一篇短文。要求意思连贯，符合逻辑。词数70个左右。

十年前	现在
生活贫困， 交通不便， 高楼少， 喝河里的水， 空气好	高楼大厦很多， 水污染严重， 交通便利， 住房宽敞、明亮， 许多人有自己的汽车。
很高兴看到好的改变；希望更好

 

Answer 1

In the past, ten years ago, My hometown was very poor. The lives of people were poor. The transportation was not convenient. People went someplace only on foot. People lived in small houses. But at that time ,the environment was very good. The air was fresh. People directly drank water from the river.
Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown. There are many tall buildings. People go to someplace by bus, car ,underground or train. People live in big and bright flats. Many people have their own cars. But water pollution is very serious. The air isn’t as good as before.
I am very happy to see these changes. I hope that my hometown will become better and better in the future.

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