Question

9．图示作文：这是刘明上周日在公园发生的事情，请根据图片内容写一篇文章．
提示词：run after a goat； get lost
作文要求：1、话题作文或图示作文任选其一．
2、要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥．
3、话题作文字数要求为80----100 词；图示作文字数要求为80词左右．
Last Sunday，Liu Ming and his friends went for a picnic at the foot of the mountain．Some of them were playing games，some were dancing，they felt very relaxed．Suddenly，Liu Ming saw a goat running．He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time．When he thought of his friends，he didn't know where he was．He got lost．At that time，a farmer came．With his help，Liu Ming found his friends again．He thanked the farmer and said"Goodbye"to him．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容根据图画所描述刘明上周日在公园发生的事情，写一篇文章．时态为一般过去时．人称为第三人称．写作要点包括：1．上周末，刘明和他的朋友们在公园玩；2．刘明看到一只山羊跑过，追了过去；3．刘明迷路了；4．在农民的帮助下找到了他的朋友们．常用的重点句型和短语：go for a picnic，be interested in，for a long time，get lost，at that time，with one's help等．

解答 Last Sunday，Liu Ming and his friends went for a picnic at the foot of the mountain．Some of them were playing games，some were dancing，they felt very relaxed．Suddenly，Liu Ming saw a goat running．He was interested in it and began to run after it for a long time．When he thought of his friends，he didn't know where he was．He got lost．At that time，a farmer came．With his help，Liu Ming found his friends again．He thanked the farmer and said"Goodbye"to him．

点评 这是一篇图画作文．该类作文写作之前，考生需仔细观察图画内容，了解事情发生的大概，一般说来，所给的几幅图都是围绕一个中心展开的．它们讲述的通常是一个小故事或小事件，这个小故事或小事件就是这组图画所要表达的中心．再根据题目要求描述每一幅图画的内容，并使文章大意连贯，故事情节完整，符合逻辑及英语的表达习惯．同时也需注意字迹工整，语法正确，