Question

Suppose you are a fan of “Where are we going, Dad”. Please write a letter to the programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip.

提示：近来“爸爸去哪儿”节目轰动了全国。如果你是这个节目的忠实粉丝，请给栏目组写一封推荐信，推荐一个地方适合父亲与孩子一起共同度过一个三天两夜的旅行，并请至少给出两个理由。

Phrases for reference （以下短语仅供参考）

be located in/on/at???????? famous for

share…with????????????? have interest in

（ 注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）

Dear Editor,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________

Yours

xxx

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I like your program very much and I am a fan of the program, Where are we going, Dad? I want to introduce a place which is suitable for dad and child to go. It is QianDao Lake. It is located in Zhejiang Province and it is famous for its islands. There are many islands there, so we call it Qiandao Lake. The weather there is very mild, which is good for children. You can see the

beautiful scene there and enjoy the fun of catching big fish with your children. Also you can taste the delicious sea food there. I think you will have an unforgettable experience there.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们给爸爸去哪儿这个节目的编辑写一封信，推荐一个适合爸爸和孩子去游玩的地方，并给出至少两个理由。这是一篇开放式的作文，去哪玩，为什么，都要自己想象。首先要选定一个适合爸爸和孩子去的地方，这个地方一定要由鲜明的特色，有吸引人的地方，还要尤其吸引小孩。然后要写出你推荐这个地方的理由。这个理由可以从那儿的气候、特色、美食、有教育意义等方面考虑。通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时，第一人称或第二人称。写作时要注意语句的衔接，表达的连贯。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。文章中给我们推荐了一个比较适合爸爸和孩子游玩的地方，开门见山，并且给出的理由也比较适合，如那里的天气很好，有吸引孩子的事情做等。文章表达流畅，注意了句与句直接的衔接，有条理。一些比较好的句式有I want to introduce a place which is suitable for dad and child to go、It is located in Zhejiang Province and it is famous for its islands.、The weather there is very mild, which is good for children、 I think you will have an unforgettable experience there等。

考点：开放性作文。