Question

假如你是一位youth worker，一位名叫Simon的初三学生给你来信倾诉他的烦恼，内容见下表。请据此给他写一封回信，提出针对性的建议（表中建议可供参考），要求不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Problems	1. spend two hours watching TV every day, have no time to do homework well 2. be crazy about computer games, be not interested in outdoor activities and study 3. Parents are angry with him and he felt very sad and hopeless
Advice	1. Understand 2. Watching too much TV and playing computer games are bad for health 3. Choose one hobby and achieve a balance between hobbies and study 4. Take part in some outdoor activities

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your letter. I hope I can offer you some useful advice.

I don’t think it’s wise to spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games.

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I hope my advice will be of some value to you.

Bill Smith  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Simon,

Thank you for your letter. I hope I can offer you some useful advice.

I don't think it's wise to spend too much time watching TV and playing computer games. They are bad for your health. At the same time, you will have no time to do your homework well. You should spent less time on TV and computer games. Your parents are angry with you, I think you should understand them. You should talk with your parents. Let them know your problems. Don't give up your hobbies. They are good for you. You can choose one hobby to do every day, then you can achieve a balance between your hobbies and study. You aren't interested in outdoor activities and study, but I think it's good for you to take part in some outdoor activities.

I hope my advice will be of some value to you. At the same time

Bill Smit

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中出现许多常见短语are bad for 对。。有坏处；have no time to do 没有时间做某事；spent less time on 花费时间在、、上；are angry with 与某人生气；give up 放弃；be interested in对、、感兴趣； take part in参加。Don't give up your hobbies用了祈使句的否定式。You can choose one hobby to do every day, then you can achieve a balance between your hobbies and study.这个句子中用then来连接。You aren't interested in outdoor activities and study, but I think it's good for you to take part in some outdoor activities这个句子中用but来连接，think后面跟着宾语从句，it is good for sb to do sth，it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式。

考点：提纲类作文.