Question

书面表达

　　以　My Best Friend and I　为题写一篇短文，比较你俩的特征，不少于６０词．

要求：１.　我的好友名叫琳达；２.在某些方面，我们看上去一样；在某些方面，我们看起来不同；３.我们都有黑眼睛，黑头发；４.她比我高，比我文静，很认真；５我外向一点，而且比她风趣；６都喜欢读书

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Answer 1

【答案】

I have a good friend. Her name is Linda. In some ways we look the same. But in other ways we are different. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller and quieter than me. She is very careful. I’m a little more outgoing than her. I am also funnier than her. We both like reading. She is good at English. But I am good at Chinese.  We often help each other.

【解析】

试题分析；这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我和我的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的交友意愿。。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。