Question

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假如你是李明，你的朋友Tim 自从上了八年级后，由于功课多，压力大，身体状况不是很好。请你给他提一些建议，告诉他如何调整好自己的状态。

内容提示：1. 要有一个平衡的饮食习惯。

2. 坚持每天运动，最好步行上学。

Answer 1

Dear Tim,

Recently, I hear that you often feel tired, and can not have a good rest at night. I think it is because of the heavy pressure of study and so many lessons to learn. Here is some advice for you.

First, you should have a balanced diet. Second, exercise is good for you. You’d better take exercise every day. It’s better to walk to school. The last one is to have 8 hours of sleep every night. Don’t stay up too late.

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求给Tim提一些建议，告诉他如何调整好自己的状态。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作内容: 1. 要有一个平衡的饮食习惯。2. 坚持每天运动，最好步行上学。3. 保证8小时睡眠，不要学习到太晚。主要内容虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据提示内容，给Tim提了一些建议，层次非常的清晰。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如 You’d better take exercise every day. Recently, I hear that you often feel tired, and can not have a good rest at night.等。

考点：话题类作文。