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【题目】写作

假如你是Nick，你的朋友Tommy下周要来扬州游玩，请你向他介绍：

1.扬州位于中国的东部，离南京大约一百公里，是个有许多古老建筑的美丽的城市。

2.是个旅游的好地方，人们可以公交车环游城市。

3.现在人们大多住在公寓里面。

4.到我家很容易。从车站出来，沿着国庆路走，在第二个红绿灯处左拐，大楼就在你的右边。我住在十二楼。

5．相信你在扬州一定能过得很愉快。 词数：80词左右。

Dear Tommy:

I want to tell you something about my hometown.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tommy:

I want to tell you something about my hometown. Yangzhou is in the east of China, about one hundred kilometers away from Nanjing. It’s a beautiful city with many ancient buildings. It’s also a good place to travel, people can travel around the city by bus. Now most people live in apartments. It’s very easy to come to my home. Come out from the station, walk along the National Road, turn left at the second traffic light, and the building is on your right. I live on the twelfth floor. I am sure you will have a good time in Yangzhou.

Welcome to Yangzhou! Welcome to my home!

Best wishes!

Nick

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作。假如你是Nick，你的朋友Tommy下周要来扬州游玩，借此介绍自己美丽的家乡。写前要认真浏览要点提示中的信息，把握写作的大体方向，运用恰当的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态。注意上下文的连贯性。

写作亮点：这篇短文根据写作要点中的信息提示简明、扼要地阐明了扬州的地理位置，风土人情，交通等方面。并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。文章语言规范，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，文章的最后提出美好的祝愿并发出邀请：I am sure you will have a good time in Yangzhou. Welcome to Yangzhou! Welcome to my home! 为文章增色不少。