Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

下周班会，英语老师要求每个同学写一篇发言稿，分享一下学习英语的经验。你可以谈谈对英语学习的认识、你的学习方法以及你的要求和建议。请根据下列提示词写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示词：important, useful, improve, listen, practice

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Answer 1

【答案】

Last year my English was difficult . At first , I can't spell the words. I can't understand grammar. I also scared to speak in class , because I thought my class might laugh at me .

Later on, I realized that it doesn't matter if you don't understand grammar.

Now , after class I study by listening English tapes every day . Evening, I can watch English-language TV . I can recite some words. I can speak English in my class , because my classmates won't laugh at me . However, I make mistakes in grammar . I'm sure they will help me. After class , I often have conversations with my friends . Sometimes, I can read English magazines . That memorizing the words also help a lot . I can practice writing . I do it often. I'm writing three or four times a week.

I hope these suggestions are helpful you. How do you learn best ?

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文是一片发言稿。第一自然段，作者用一般过去时，先说去年自己的英语不好，不会拼单词，不懂语法，也不敢在课堂上说英语，害怕学生嘲笑自己。接着说自己认识到不懂语法没关系，只要努力学习，接下来介绍一下自己是怎样学习英语的。最后，说希望自己的建议会有帮助。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，先总后分，条理清楚，用词准确。这篇作文符合要求，语句通顺，没有语法错误。文中运用了短语at first，later on，now，接着说自己是怎样学习英语的。紧跟着用however说明自己也犯错误，但确信对自己也有很大帮助。作者说明在课堂上in class 和课下after class是如何学习英语的，文中还准确地运用了情态动词can和can’t。另外，文中还运用了also，sometimes，often，every day 等.副词，时态运用的也很到位。从以上娴熟的词、短语以及句子和时态的应用来看，作者能很熟练、灵活地应用所学的知识。这篇短文堪称佳作。