Question

书面表达。

     假设你有一个非常要好的朋友叫Tom，他与你同班了三年，很快就要随父母回国了。
请你根据以下提示，介绍你的这位朋友。
          
要求：1．以上所有提示必须用上，可适当发挥； 
          2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 
          3．针对他的不足，提出你的建议，不少于两条；
          4．80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

                                             My good friend Tom
     Tom is my good friend who came to China three years ago. ________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
                                                       My good friend Tom
     Tom is my good friend who came to China three years ago. He will go back to Canada with his parents
soon. Tom is tall and strong. He plays football very well and was in our school football team last term. He
wears glasses because of his poor eyesight. Tom is easy-going and creative. He was once the good host of
our school English Corner. Tom has some shortcomings. He likes eating a lot of snacks. I think it's not good
for his health. I will advise him to shop doing that. He often spends too much money but I think he'd better
not. As students, we don't make money. We should have the habit of saving money.