题目内容
【题目】书面表达(共l题;满分20分)
DIY在年轻人中很流行,Tom昨天完成了他的第一份DIY作品。请根据下面的提示以第一人称帮他写篇英语作文,题目为My first DIY job,词数不少于80。(开头已给出,不计入总词数。)将答案写在答题卷上。
1. 上周,在网上购买了颜料和两把刷子。
2. 首先,仔细看了说明书。
3. 然后,把墙漆成了蓝色,但是整个房间看起来有一点单调。
4. 最后,决定在墙上画一些色彩斑斓的鱼和一条小船。
5. 油漆满地板都是,不得不花一个小时把房间收拾干净。现在整个房间看上去真的很棒。
6. 希望了解更多有关DIY,我将……(自拟至少一点)
My first DIY job
DIY is popular among young people. I did my first DIY job yesterday.
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My first DIY job
DIY is popular among young people. I did my first DIY job yesterday.
Last week, I bought some paint and two brushes on the Internet. First, I read the introductions. Then I painted the walls blue. But the whole room looked a little boring. Next, I decided to draw some colorful fish and a boat on the wall. There was paint all over the floor.(/Paint was all over the floor.) I had to spend one hour tidying up the room. Now the room looks really great.
I hope to learn more about DIY. I will take a course in it. And I will buy some books about DIY. I believe I will do better next time.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点,并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是以第一人称,用一般过去时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:这篇短文使用First、Next等使得文章非常条理,还使用了一些连接词如and、不同,为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。