Question

书面表达（共1题；满分15分）

    假如你是王勤，请根据以下提示介绍一下你的表哥和他的书房。

    1．你有个表哥，叫Peter。来自上海，现就读于苏州阳光中学，喜欢看书；

    2．他有个书房，里面有一书架，上面有许多书；

    3．书架旁可以看到一幅画，画中有几个男孩，他们在河里游泳；

    4．他经常在书房里看书、做作业。很喜欢他的书房。

  要求：

    1．内容必须包括上表中的要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。

    2. 80词左右，  语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整。

My cousin and his study

My name is Wang Qin._________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

　    

                              Peter and his study

  I have a cousin and he is Peter. He is from Shanghai and studies in Suzhou Yangguang Middle School. He likes reading books so he is good at all his subjects.

  He has a study room. There is a bookshelf in his study and there are many books on the shelf. You can see a picture beside the shelf and there are some boys in the picture. The boys are swimming in the river. He often reads books, and does his homework in his study. He likes his study very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细但很简单，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要仔细考虑，不可遗漏要点，也可适当发挥。根据材料内容可知，本文以一般现在时态为主，主语是第三人称。

【亮点说明】这篇文章主要是Peter的书房。作者使用了一般现在时和there be结构，以及现在进行时等，还是用了and，so等连接词为文章增色不少。对于初一的学生来说，确属不错的英语短文了。

考点：话题作文。