题目内容

14.每个人都有自己的梦想,努力坚持终能实现.请根据图及表格中所提供的信息写一篇文章.(精校)


Tom1.出身贫寒,付不起学费,但一直自学,考取了大学.
2.上人学时坚持打零工(part-time job)并照顾遭遇车祸的父母.
3.坚持梦想(follow one's dream),拥有了自己的农场.
You    你的梦想
如何实现你的梦想勤奋学习  …
要求:
(1)所写内容必须包括表格中的信息,可适当发挥.
(2)介绍Tom,谈谈你的梦想并自拟两点实现梦想的途径.
(3)文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数.
(4)语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,条理清楚,字迹工整.
(5)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名.
Everyone has his/her dream.The one who never gives up can achieve his/her goal.Tom is a very good example.Hewas born in a poor family.His parents didn't have enough money to pay for his study so that he couldn't go to school.He was very sad,but nothing could stop him from studying.He kept on learning by himself at home.At last,he got high grades and
entered his ideal college.Unfortunately,a terrible accident happened to his parents.During the time he was at college,he did part-time jobs for a living and took good care of his parents.Because he followed his dream all the time,he became the owner of a large farm successfully.
I have my own dream,too.I want to be a teacher to hlp the children in poor areas.From now on,I must work hard,correct my own shortcomings and improve myself.I will never give up my dream whenever facing difficulties.I'm sure my dream will come true..

分析 本文是一篇图画加提纲的作文,写作内容主要分两块,1.介绍Tom的成功的例子.2.介绍自己的理想以及如何实现.在第二点上,需要学生充分发挥自己的能力,展开想象.介绍Tom时,要用第三人称,时态用一般过去时,介绍自己的梦想时,要用第一人称,时态用一般将来时.

解答 Everyone has his/her dream.The one who never gives up can achieve his/her goal.Tom is a very good example.He was born in a poor family.His parents didn't have enough money to pay for his study so that he couldn't go to school.He was very sad,but nothing could stop him from studying.He kept on learning by himself at home.At last,he got high grades and 
entered his ideal college.Unfortunately,a terrible accident happened to his parents.During the time he was at college,he did part-time jobs for a living and took good care of his parents.Because he followed his dream all the time,he became the owner of a large farm successfully.
    I have my own dream,too.I want to be a teacher to hlp the children in poor areas.From now on,I must work hard,correct my own shortcomings and improve myself.I will never give up my dream whenever facing difficulties.I'm sure my dream will come true.

点评 本题是看图作文与提纲作文的结合,内容看似很多,实际上主要分成两大块,首先要求按照所给图画,通过所给信息,把内容正确地表达出来,然后展开想象,完整好自己的梦想以及如何实现.人称和时态的转换是本文的重点和难点.

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