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8．背景设定：在6月份进行的女子世界杯亚洲区出线赛中，我们一直引以为傲的"铿锵玫瑰"，却遗憾的落选，不能进入女子世界杯总决赛．赛后的记者采访中，女足队员们说她们不会被击败，会总结自己的不足，提高自己的能力，争取在下一次比赛中取得好的成绩．假如你是小刚，请谈谈你在学习中遇到的问题及解决的方法．

遇到的问题	（1）作业太多，休息时间太少；（2）压力太大，厌倦学习；（3）迷失自我，易怒、易生气
解决的办法	（1）劳逸结合，学会放松；（2）学会沟通，释放压力；（3）学会学习、注重方法

要求：（1）围绕以上内容进行合理表述．（2）所表述的内容必须包含表中的六个方面．（3）文中请不要出现真实的姓名、校名和地名．（4）词数不得少于80，开头语已给出．（不计入词数）
提示词：too much，little，nervous，pressure，be tired of，lose，angry，relax，talk with，suggestion，make a plan，find out
Our Steel Rose lost a chance to take part in the Women's World Cup．But the player never gave up．They said they would try their best to improve themselves．
I always meet some problems in my study…
Every day I have too much homework to do，while I have too little time for rest．I feel nervous because of too much pressure．Sometimes I really tired of studying．I even don′t know what to do．I think I have lost myself．This feeling makes me angry easily．
What should I do？The players from National Women Soccer Team set a good example for me．That is"never give up"．I think I should learn how to study．First，relax myself though I have much to do．Second，talk with my parents，teachers or friends to ask them for suggestions．Maybe they can help me out of such pressure．Third，make a good plan for my study and find out my own way to learn．
In a word，I will never give up．I will regard the problem as challenges．I will try my best to make my dream come true．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈你在学习中遇到的问题及解决的方法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1遇到的问题（1）作业太多，休息时间太少；（2）压力太大，厌倦学习；（3）迷失自我，易怒、易生气
2解决的办法：（1）劳逸结合，学会放松；（2）学会沟通，释放压力；（3）学会学习、注重方法

常用到的重点短语：
because of 因为…
be tired of…厌倦…
make sb do sth让某人做某事
talk with sb 与…交流
make a plan 制定计划
find out 找出
in a word 总之
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事

高分句型：
1． Every day I have too much homework ①to do，②while I have too little time for rest．
①动词不定式to do 做后置定语，修饰前面的homework，非谓语动词的运用．
②While作并列连词用，意思为"而，然而"，表前后两种情况的对比．
2．First，relax myself though I have much to do．
though连词，表示虽然，引导让步状语从句，不能和but连用．

解答 Our Steel Rose lost a chance to take part in the Women's World Cup．But the player never gave up．They said they would try their best to improve themselves．
I always meet some problems in my study．Every day I have too much homework to do，while I have too little time for rest．（高分句型）（作业太多，休息时间太少）I feel nervous because of too much pressure．Sometimes I really tired of studying．（压力太大，厌倦学习）I even don′t know what to do．I think I have lost myself．This feeling makes me angry easily．（迷失自我，易怒、易生气）
What should I do？The players from National Women Soccer Team set a good example for me．That is"never give up"．I think I should learn how to study．First，relax myself though I have much to do．（高分句型）（劳逸结合，学会放松）Second，talk with my parents，teachers or friends to ask them for suggestions．Maybe they can help me out of such pressure（学会沟通，释放压力）．Third，make a good plan for my study and find out my own way to learn．（学会学习、注重方法）
In a word，I will never give up．I will regard the problem as challenges．I will try my best to make my dream come true．

点评 逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．
以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．