Question

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“世界无烟日(Non-smoking Day)”那天，某中学对该校学生吸烟情况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。

要求：1．对调查结果进行描述。

2．表明自己的看法并提出建议。

3．所写内容符合“世界无烟日”主题。

4．词数80个左右。

提示词语：do a survey about…(做一个有关……的调查)， 3％of the students(百分之三的学生)

 

Answer 1

【答案】

On Non—smoking Day, a school did a survey about how many students smoke．Here are the results：3％of the students often smoke．7％of the students smoke sometimes．These students say they smoke just for fun and they look cool while smoking．Nearly everyone knows smoking does no good to people’s health，especially for teenagers．As students，we should not smoke．Those who smoke should give up smoking．And if our family members smoke，we should try to stop them．Students who have never smoked should never try it

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，围绕世界无烟日这个主题用英语写一篇短文，要求对调查结果进行描述，表明自己的看法并提出建议，本文给出了提示词，语句通顺，符合逻辑，尤其表明自己的看法，向中学生发出倡议。