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网络正逐渐走进我们的生活，而其利弊也都不同程度地显现了出来。请以Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet为题，写一篇80字左右的短文。

提示：可以从read news, e-mail, chat, study, play games, see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones等方面加以评论。

要求：1．要有表明自己观点的句子。

2．书写工整，句式规范，条理清楚，标点符号使用正确。

3．短文中应包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。

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One possible version： Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet 　　Internet is now coming into our life．It brings us not only a lot of convenience, happiness but also troubles．Some students use Internet as a tool to study．They look up the meanings of the words, a translated form of a sentence, the background of an event or a story, the information of a company or a famous person, etc．They also read news or send e-mails through it．Internet helps them learn more and study well． 　　On the other hand, some students play games, chat with friends, see the pictures or films even the unhealthy ones on the Internet the whole day．They are not interested in their subjects．It's very dangerous for them! 　　The Internet's advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us．I think we should make good use of it and stay away from the unhealthy websites． 　　一、评分原则 　　1．本题总分为10分，按四个档次给分，至少包含以下要点：网络给人们带来的好处；存在的弊端；个人的观点以及所给提示性内容。 　　2．评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 　　3．文中若出现真实的人名、地名，酌情扣分。 　　二、评分标准 　　三、说明： 　　1．所给提示性词语不受范围和顺序的限制。 　　2．相同的错误不重复计算。