题目内容

【题目】书面表达(共1题,计15分)

假设你是Tina,笔友Tom向你诉说了他的烦恼:他最好的朋友要过生日,他的朋友们准备的礼物都很贵,可是他却没有足够的钱给最好的朋友买很昂贵的礼物。请根据提示给他写一封回信,给他一些合理的建议。

提示:1. 买礼物并不一定必须买贵的。2. 同学应该会理解。3. 可以买花或者自制贺卡等。

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Glad to hear from you, but I’m sorry to know that you’re so worried. In my opinion, gifts are just something to show our love. It has nothing to do with money.

I don’t think you need to buy an expensive gift, although your classmates will buy expensive gifts for him. If you buy one expensive gift, you will need too much money. And if you don’t have enough money, you have to ask your parents for money. And I don’t think it is a good idea. Why don’t you buy some flowers and make a beautiful birthday card for your best friend? That’ll be enough to mak e him happy.

Yours,

Tina

【解析】

试题分析:本篇作文素材取材于学生的生活中所遇到的困难。同学过生日,自己买不起很贵重的礼物,觉得贵重的礼物才代表着友情。这种事情在现在的学生中也很普遍。应该教导学生平时树立健康的价值观。题目中给出了一些建议用来让考生参考。会简单的翻译,再稍微发挥,文章很容易完成。

写作亮点:本篇文章对书信的格式运用正确,信的开头和结尾严格按照书信的要求来写。这是写书信文章最先需要注意的。另外本文中句型运用熟练。长短句,简单句和复杂句交替使用。运用表达恰当。句子毫不单调,显示了作者较好的英语表达水平。该篇作文还有不少亮点词组作为加分理由。比如说In my opinion nothing to do with 等。

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