Question

假如你叫周欣，下周五是你最好的朋友凯特（Kate）的生日，你决定给北京广播电台英语栏目组的主持人写封邮件，希望在节目中送上你对凯特的生日祝福，以及歌曲“You’re my best friend”。
要点提示：1．凯特如何帮助过你；
2．你对凯特的帮助表示感谢；
3．送上你对她的生日祝福。
要求：1．70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．语句通顺，语法正确。
Dear presenter,
I’m writing this letter because I want to thank my best friend Kate and send my best wishes in your programme．
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So much thanks．
Yours，
Zhou Xin                               

Answer 1

Dear presenter，
I’m writing this letter because I want to thank my best friend Kate and send my best wishes in your programme．Kate helps me a lot in my school subjects，especially English．She not only tells me how I should learn it，but also talks with me in English to improve my speaking．I’m very lucky to have Kate as my friend．Next Friday will be her birthday．I’d like to thank her for helping me and I wish her happy birthday．I also have a song for her called，“You’re my best friend，”and tell her that she will always be my best friend．
So much thanks．
Yours,
Zhou Xin

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者先写自己的个人情况，包括所在学校、星座、性格、爱好，然后写自己的烦恼，最后请求帮助。全文主要用一般现在时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 a lot,not only...but also,talks with,thank  for, in English等短语，文中还用到了宾语从句how I should learn it，that she will always be my best friend；固定句型I’d like to do.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。