Question

【题目】书面表达

母爱情深，学会感恩。母亲节即将来临，请你借此机会写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你的母亲。提示如下：

1. 母亲的年龄、职业、外貌、能力和业余爱好等。

2. 母亲为你做了很多事，在学习上帮助你，当你遇到困难时，希望你能笑对生活。她工作勤奋，为了让你们过上更好的生活。

3. 将来，你为母亲做什么？现在你有什么打算？(可适当发挥)

My Mother

Mother's Day is coming. I'd like to say something about my mother.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My mother

Mother's Day is coming. I would like to say something about my mother. My mother is forty-two years old. She is a worker and looks slim but energetic. My mother is good at planning things and does well in her work. She loves music and sports.

My mother has done much for me. She has help me a lot. When I have problems or trouble, she always expects me to smile to life. She works hard to make us live a better life.

What should I do for my mother in the future? I will take good care of her. I will try my best to study. I shall be kind and helpful like her. I am sure my mother will live a happy life. I LOVE MY MOTHER.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者介绍自己的母亲，给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如My mother is good at planning things and does well in her work. She loves music and sports.

My mother has done much for me. She has help me a lot. When I have problems or trouble, she always expects me to smile to life.等等。