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以My best friend 为题,用英语写一篇短文,词数80左右。内容包括以下几个要点,可适当发挥。
要点: 1.既是你同班同学又是你最好的朋友;
戴小而圆的眼镜,总是穿黑色的颜色;
友好而慷慨,愿意帮助别人,朋友很多;
擅长英语,经常在英语方面帮助同学,所有同学都非常喜欢他/她;
打算长大以后成为一名社会工作者。

My best friend
I have a lot of friends and my best friend is Tina. We are in the same class. Tina is a lovely girl. She always wears a pair of small and round glasses and she is often wearing black clothes. She is kind and generous. She is always ready to help others, so she has lots of friends. She is good at English and she often helps our classmates with their English. Everyone in my class likes her. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up.

试题分析:这篇作文要求我们介绍自己最好的朋友。这个人是谁可以自己来决定,自己发挥。题目中给我们列出了一些我们需要写的内容,包括这个最好的朋友的外貌、性格、爱好、理想等。我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来,加上一些连词的使用,使表达流畅,意思连贯。另外,写这篇作文时主要用到第三人称,所以一定要注意谓语动词的形式,一定要和人称搭配起来,这对于学生们来说是一个容易忽略的地方。写作时可能用到的句型和词汇有:wear、friendly、generous、 be ready to do sth.、want to do sth.、lots of/ a lot of、be good at、help sb. with等。
【亮点说明】这篇范文内容完整,意思连贯,是一篇比较优秀的作文。文中开门见山的点明了自己的好朋友是Tina,然后对Tina的外形、性格、爱好等做了详细的介绍,使我们对Tina有了一个初步的了解。这篇作文在写作时严格按照了题目中所列出的要点,逐条翻译,这样做可以避免遗漏要点,但同时又使得文章太琐碎,缺少连贯性。写作时可以将相似的要点归类表达,使文章的意思更加连贯。对于八年级的学生来说,他们应该比较熟悉一些简单的连词的使用,如and、 but、so 等。这篇作文中主要用到了and 和so,还是比较不错的。另外,文章中还用到了像be good at、be ready to do sth.、want to do sth.等句型。第三人称单数的使用也很准确。
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根据短文内容回答下列问题。
小题1:How many rules should the riders follow? Give one example.
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小题2:According to the National Safety Council’s report, what’s the total number of injuries and deaths in one recent year?
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