Question

【题目】书面表达（共15分）

你愿意帮助他人吗？如果你有机会成为志愿者，你愿意做什么工作呢？为什么？

根据以上要求，写一篇短文，词数在60左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, I am a middle school student. After school, I like to play with my pet Tiantian, a lovely dog. Now in town, many families have their pets. Of course, those pets can make their owners happy. At the same time, they pollute the environment with their waste.

If l can be a volunteer, I'd like to help to solve this problem. First, I need to tell people the importance of environment; then I will make them realize the pet waste has polluted our living conditions badly; at last, we will discuss how to prevent the pets from making the environment dirty.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文只给出了简单的写作提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如First, I need to tell people the importance of environment; then I will make them realize the pet waste has polluted our living conditions badly; at last, we will discuss how to prevent the pets from making the environment dirty.

等等。