Question

【题目】书面表达（10分）

假设你叫Bill, 你的父母给你选了许多课外活动，但有些是你不喜欢的，你打算如何向他们讲清楚却又不伤害他们呢？请你给父母写一封80词左右的信，信中要包括以下内容：

（1）你为什么不喜欢他们给你选的课外活动；

（2）你对父母为你选课外辅导班的看法；你对父母的要求或希望；

（3）告诉父母你能够在轻松，快乐中学习，成长，并能取的好成绩，父母不用担心。

可以适当发挥，注意语句通顺，行文连贯。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad and Mom,

Thanks a lot for your great love for me.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Dad and Mum,

Thanks a lot for you great love on me. I understand that you are trying hard to make me become a versatile person by choosing lots of extra-curricular activities for me. However, in fact, I doesn't enjoy them. I have a piano class on Monday, a dancing class on Wednesday and a drawing class on Friday.Actually, I am interested in Sports but not Music. I want to join the other kind of extra-curricular activities like kickboxing, table tennis, and so on. Hope that I can spend my time for my own interests. Thank you very much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。要求介绍你的父母给你选了许多课外活动，但有些是你不喜欢的，你打算向他们讲清楚却又不伤害他们。

【亮点说明】这篇短文要点全，能将主要内容表达清楚，没有语言错误。适当的应用连词，例如However, in fact, but not使短文更条理。