Question

【题目】书面表达。（满分10分）

假如你是林涛，想和Julia交笔友。请根据下表内容，给她发封电子邮件介绍一下自己的情况。要求：字迹工整、规范，60词左右。可适当发挥。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Name	Lin Tao
Age	13
Look	tall, round face, big nose, big eyes, small mouth
Job	student
School	No.7 Junior High School, Beijing
Favorite animals and food	cats, dogs, rice, chicken

Dear Julia,

My name is Lin Tao. I want to make penfriends with you.

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Do you like to be my pen pal?

Yours,

Lin Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Julia,

My name is Lin Tao. I want to make penfriends with you. I’m 13 years old. I’m tall and I have a round face, a big nose, big eyes and a small mouth. I’m a student. I study in No.7 Junior High School, Beijing. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I like animals very much. My favorite animals are dogs and cats. My favorite food is rice and chicken.

Do you like to be my pen pal?

Yours,

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，林涛给Julia发的一封电子邮件介绍自己的情况，并想和她交笔友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is…，I’m ....； I like....以及My favorite animals are.....等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，完整的表达出表格中所列内容。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头林涛介绍了写信的目的，想和Julia交笔友，接下来介绍自己的长相和所在班级，最后介绍自己的。此处want to do sth, make penfriends, like to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。