Question

书面表达。（15分）
前些年，随着工业的发展，南京的环境一度受到污染。但近年来，随着人们环保意识的增强，城市的面貌焕然一新。请仔细观察下面四幅图，写一篇有关南京城市变化的短文，可适当发挥，80词左右。文章的开头部分已给出。

Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted.
Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted.______________________________
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Answer 1

Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted. Heavy smoke and waste water from the factories made the air and river dirty. In the street, you can see litter here and theer. However, people have understood the importance of protecting our environment. They have planted many trees and the air is becoming fresh. You can see fish swimming in the clean rivers and birds flying among the trees. There are wide streets with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides. The old city has taken on a new look.

试题分析：这是一篇图画作文，且是写一篇有关南京城市变化的短文，所以要用第三人称来写。对于南京过去的情况，要用一般过去时，而对于南京的现状要用现在的相关时态。对于图画类作文，必须要看懂图画。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数不少于80词，不要太多也不要太少。
点评：本文属于图画类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析图画，理解图画要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。