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书面表达(本题共10分)
假如你是李华,请围绕以下几个方面给你的笔友Tom写封信,谈谈你期末考试后假期的打算。 (开头和结尾已给出)
1. 经过繁忙的复习、考试后,想在假期中休息一下;做自己喜欢做的事……
2. 多与父母交流,帮助做家务。
3. 参加社会实践(如:帮助老人、残疾人(disabled)等),增加对社会的了解。  
注意:1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名。2. 字数:80词左右(已给出的句子不计入总词数)。
DearTom,
How are yougettingonthesedays?I’vejust finishedmyfinalexam.          
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                               
Best wishes!
Yours,
LiHua

Dear Tom,  
How are you getting on these days? I’ve just finished my final exam. After working hard for a long time, I really want to have a good rest during the winter vacation. First, I’m going to watch some interesting movies and read some good books. Then, it’s time to communicate with my parents. I wish to share my happiness and sadness with them. Besides, I plan to help do some housework. At last, I hope to be a volunteer, helping the old and disabled as much as possible. In this way, I can know about the world better.
By the way, how will you spend your vacation?
Best wishes!

解析试题分析:对于书信的文体,要注意与对方的互动就行进行面对面对话一样,所以结尾可以问问他是如何安排的。本文中首先对考试后自己想休息一下进行总的描写,然后分三到四点内容进行讲述我要做些什么,对最后一点做法的意义进行一下说明,这样体现出详略得当,最后询问他会如何安排,显得亲切得体。
考点:提纲类写作
点评:本文难度不大,写作条理性要把握好,对于要做的几件事情,写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词,或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文,对表达好的句子,短语要进行积累,并默写,考试前再集中看一下,这样做到有备无患。

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书面表达(本题共10分)

假如你是李华,请围绕以下几个方面给你的笔友Tom写封信,谈谈你期末考试后假期的打算。 (开头和结尾已给出)

1. 经过繁忙的复习、考试后,想在假期中休息一下;做自己喜欢做的事……

2. 多与父母交流,帮助做家务。

3. 参加社会实践(如:帮助老人、残疾人(disabled)等),增加对社会的了解。  

注意:1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名。2. 字数:80词左右(已给出的句子不计入总词数)。

DearTom,

How are yougettingonthesedays?I’vejust finishedmyfinalexam.          

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                              

                                                                               

Best wishes!

Yours,

LiHua

 

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