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3.现在,有的同学不吃早饭就去上学. 请针对这种现象写一篇短文.内容包括:
   1.学生不吃早饭的原因;
   2.不吃早饭对学生的影响(至少两个方面);
   3.你认为应该如何合理安排早餐?
   要求:1.字数:80-100字.开头已给出,不计入总字数.
         2.文中不得出现真实的校名与大名.
   Some of us go to school without having breakfast.

分析 这是一篇话题类作文,由于题干给出的要点比较简洁,所以需要对要点进行扩展.题目中的要点都要提到,缺一不可.首先分析学生不吃早饭的原因,然后讲述不吃早饭对学生的影响,最后给出合理早餐的建议.文章用一般现在时态叙述,用第一人称.用表示建议的句子表达自己的看法,如:You'd better…/It's better…等等.

解答 参考范文:
Some of us go to school without having breakfast.We stay up late to study.We prefer sleeping a little longer to getting up early.So we don't have enough time for breakfast.In the morning we usually have four classes.It's a long time before lunch.If we don't have breakfast,we may feel hungry in class and won't concentrate on our study.What's more,it's bad for our health.
From now on,we'd better get up a little earlier,and have noodles for breakfast.It's also good to have bread,milk and eggs.It's better to have some fruit after breakfast.
Let's have breakfast every day.

点评 本文属于话题类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作练习以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.

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