题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假如你家里有多口人,现在是晚上七点钟,请展开想象,用现在进行时描写一下家里每个人在做的事情,不少于60个词,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。还应该写提示词以外的内容。
father | read a newspaper |
mother | clean the floor |
sister | watch TV |
brother | play the guitar |
I | Do homework |
It is 7:00 o’clock now. Everyone in my family is very busy .
【答案】
Now it is seven o’clock in the evening. Everyone in my family is very busy. Look! My father is reading a newspaper. He likes reading. My mother is cleaning the floor. She often does housework in my family. My sister is watching TV. She likes watching cartoons. My brother is playing the guitar. He is in the music club in his school. What am I doing? I am doing my homework.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们以题目中的要求为背景,介绍一下此时此刻家庭成员都在做些什么。题目中利用表格的形式,给我们列出了一个写作的简要的提纲,我们应使用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来,另外,还需根据情景的需要,补充适当的内容,以使短文的内容更加丰富、完整。通过分析可知,这篇短文介绍的是7点钟时,家里的人正在做什么,因此这篇短文应使用现在进行时态,即be+现在分词的形式,根据主语的变化,使用正确的be动词的形式,同时动词应变为它的现在分词,要注意形式的正确。写作时,可以使用一些好的句型和短语,增强文章的表现力。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文的作者按照题目的要求,介绍了自己家的家庭成员此时此刻都在做些什么。语言准确,语法符合规范,使用了正确的时态,即现在进行时,be动词的使用要随主语而改变,动词应使用他们的现在分词形式,这些形式的变化也很准确。内容完整,情节丰富,句式也有变化。短文里较好的句式有He likes reading、She often does housework in my family、She likes watching cartoons、He is in the music club in his school等。