Question

书面表达

家有家规，校有校纪。父母为你制定了哪些家规？你在学校要遵守哪些校规？请选择其中一个话题，首先描述这些规定；然后阐述你对其中一项规定的看法，并提出改善的建议。

注意：从下面所给的两个题目中任选一个

字数80左右。

Answer 1

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解析：

Possible version 1： At home 　　Every family has rules．Now I’ll tell you about my rules at home．I can’t go out on school nights, and I’m not allowed to play computer games even after I’ve finish my homework．But the most terrible rule I have is that I have to go to bed before 9 o’clock．I used to finish my homework at school when I was a pupil, but now I am a middle school student, and usually have more homework to do．So I can’t finish it by 10 o’clock．I think I should be allowed to go to bed later, let’s say, by 11 o’clock． 　　Possible version 2： At school 　　There are a lot of rules in our school．For example, we can’t eat in classrooms, and we are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school, and so on．I think most of them are good for us, but some are not．One of the rules I hate most is that we have to wear school uniforms at school．I think we should be allowed to wear our own clothes．It makes us feel happier．If we can’t wear our own clothes at school, we should be allowed to design our school uniforms．It will make both teachers and students happy． 　　评分标准： 　　第一档：(13～15分) 　　完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。 　　第二档：(9～12分) 　　基本符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 　　第三档：(5～8分) 　　部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不够清楚，内容不够完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。 　　第四档：(0～4分) 　　与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。