Question

你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My special_____”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
要求：1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象， 如grandma, teacher 或friend等；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.80词左右。
My special

Answer 1

One possible version：
My special grandma
My grandma is special to me because we’re like friends. She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble. There are no secrets between us.
When I am with my grandma, we spend a lot of happy time together. I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. My grandma is good at many things. One thing she’s best at is cooking. She often cooks delicious food for me. I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的家庭成员，朋友、老师或同学。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My grandma is ......；She always helps......；When I am......；My grandma is ......及I know......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达喜爱所描述的人。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己的奶奶，接下来介绍奶奶的特点，最后指出他们互相关爱。此处用了helps me out， in trouble，with my grandma，is good at，等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。