Question

电视已成为我们生活中的一部分，看电视有好处也有坏处，根据你自身的体会，给大家提些自己的看法。请根据下面提供的要点写一篇短文：

1. 我们应该选择合适的节目，比如看纪录片可以帮助我们了解许多有关自然和历史的知识；

2. 周一至周五我们学习很忙，我们最好在周末或假日里看电视；

3. 必须计划好自己的时间，试图在学习和看电视之间取得平衡是很重要的；

4. 看电视可以帮助我们放松，同时也能学到许多有用的知识；

5. 看太多的电视对眼睛不好, 你认为……。

注意：1.全文要通顺、连贯；

      2. 词数80左右；

      3. 对第6要点作1-2句话的适当发挥。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

 Now more and more people own televisions, which present a very vivid world to us. On television, we can watch exciting matches and see most of the places of interests without going there ourselves. Television also plays an educational role in our daily life. Children enjoy learning much interesting knowledge from TV. By providing various TV university courses, television offers various educational programs for different viewers. 

However, television can also be harmful. It hurts our eyes. Watching TV too much influences our sleep and work. Now many students spend too much time on TV, which reduces their study time and does great harm to our eyes.

In a word, we should choose some good programs to watch, especially for children

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果

【亮点说明】范文中出现很多常见的词组：plays an educational role in 起重要作用；learn sth from从中当中学到； spend sth on sth 在。。花费时间或金钱；do harm to对。。有害。 Now more and more people own televisions, which present a very vivid world to us在这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句。Watching TV too much influences our sleep and work这个句子中动名词做主语。Now many students spend too much time on TV, which reduces their study time and does great harm to our eyes这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句，and连接reduces与does，时态保持一致。

考点： 提纲类作文。