Question

假如你叫王平，是一名即将毕业的初三学生，关于初中学校生活，你一定有一些感想，请你根据下表所提示的要点，用英语给初一新生写一封信，在课堂学习、课外兴趣及能力培养等方面提出一些建议，并陈述理由，帮助他们形成良好的学习习惯。

学校生活	建议要点	陈述理由
课堂学习	努力学习功课，课上认真听讲； ……（自拟一点）	…… （自拟一点）
课外兴趣	保持良好兴趣，参加兴趣活动； ……（自拟一点）	…… （自拟一点）
能力培养	小组活动积极，勇于发表观点； ……（自拟一点）	…… （自拟一点）

 

注意:1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3.短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。

Dear friends,

As a graduating student, I'd like to share my experience in school life with you.

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

                                                                            

I hope you will enjoy your new school life.

Yours sincerely，

Wang Ping

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear friends,

As a graduating student, I'd like to share my experience in school life with you.

First, you should work hard at all your lessons. It’s important for you to listen carefully in class. If you have any problem with your study, you can go to your teachers.

Second, you'd better keep some hobbies, like singing and dancing. They may help you relax. There are many different kinds of activities. You need to take an active part in them. You should plan your time carefully because you will have much more homework than before.

Third, you should be active in groups in class and be brave to express your ideas. And you should learn to get on well with your teachers and classmates. Being friendly and helpful is also very important.

I hope you will enjoy your new school life.

Yours sincerely，

Wang Ping

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作条理性非常重要，使用first,second,third从三方面进行论述。根据题意首先对课堂学习方面的建议及理由进行阐述work hard at all your lessons. 及have any problem with your study, you can go to your teachers.然后对课外兴趣爱好方面提出建议和理由You should plan your time carefully because you will have much more homework than before.最后说明，应该在能力培养方面多参加活动，勇于表达自己的观点express your ideas.并提出自己的建议和理由Being friendly and helpful is also very important. 通过这些方面的描写，文章的意思表达就和题目中有机的结合在了一起。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：初中英语的作文，出考察学生连词成句的能力外，还要求学生能够变换句式，学会用不同的表达，来表达同一个意思，要在“准”字和“美”上下功夫。在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面，同时要学会多用副词来修饰谓语动词，这样显示出深厚的语言根底。对于初三的作文，在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文。