Question

研究表明音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情。请根据下表提示内容，写一篇英语短文。

听音乐前的情绪状态	适用音乐	听音乐后的心境
压力大，过分焦虑	流行音乐	放松
沉迷电脑游戏，兴奋过度	乡村音乐	平静(calm)
困倦、疲劳	摇滚音乐	振奋
孤独、悲伤	（考生自拟）	（考生自拟）

注意：1. 要求80-100词。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；

????? 2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点；

????? 3. 条理清楚，语句连贯；

????? 4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。

?????? Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods(情绪). ________

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Answer 1

【答案】

?? Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music. If you have too much pressure, you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed. People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. And if you feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up. It makes me happy again.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写音乐对人们的情绪有着重要的影响，因此人们用不同的音乐来调节心情，全文主要用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 has an important effect on，listening to ，different kinds of，cheer me up，so that；宾语从句如 that music has an important effect on one’s moods；定语从句如who enjoy playing computer games，which always cheers me up；条件状语从句如If you have too much pressure, if you feel tired and sleepy；时间状语从句如When I feel lonely and sad；目的状语从句如 so that you will feel excited again；结果状语从句如so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. 文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文。