Question

假如你叫张霖，暑假后就要进入高中(senior high school)学习。由于住校(live at school)与住在家里各有利弊，你想通过e-mail征求英国笔友Bill的意见。内容应包括住宿、饮食、交通等几个方面。
注意：1、字数要控制在100词左右。
2、不要出现你的真实姓名。
3、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总数。
Dear Bill,
How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I’m writing to ask for your advice.
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It’s so hard for me to make a decision. I’ll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.
Please write back soon.
Yours,
Zhang Lin

Answer 1

Dear Bill,
How is everything going? Something is troubling me very much. So I'm writing to ask for your advice.
I'm going to study in the senior middle school in September. I can live either at school or at home. But
I can't decide because both have advantages and disadvantages.
At home, I have my own room. So I can have a good sleep. However, I have to share one room with
5-6 students at school. Maybe I can't sleep well. It's a problem. Although I can have better food at home,
I enjoy eating with my classmates. I think it's great fun and I can make more friends. If I live at home,
I'll have to ride to school. It's a waste of time and not safe.
It's so hard to make a decision. I'll be very glad if you could give me some suggestions.
Please write back soon.
Zhang Lin

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。住校不住校各有利弊，你难以决定，所以你向你的笔友征求住不住校的的建议。文章主要用到一般现在时。
【亮点说明】这篇短文层次分名，先说明自己的困惑：不能就住校还是不住校做决定，然后说明自己对住不住校的看法，最后重申自己的问题，请求建议。这种结构安排使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。