Question

11．假设你是大明，你的笔友给你来信了．请阅读以下来信，并根据内容写一封回信．
要求：1.80词左右；2．文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息．

Dear Daming， I'd like to tell you something about my"important gift"．It was a beautiful smile． When I was nine years old，I went to a new school．As a result，no one knew who I was．I felt lonely．Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual，a girl walked to me and smiled． Though she said no words，I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm again．After that she became my good friend． As we all know，everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble．Could you tell me something about your"important gift"that touched you or changed your life？ Yours， Susan

Dear Susan，
I'm glad to read your letter and your"important gift"really touches me．As for me，my"important gift"was my mum's sad tears．
Two years ago，I became a"problem child"，and I was tired of everything．I did everything that was against my parents．That made my mum very sad，but she still loved me as usual．
One night，I lost my reason and broke a glass，which caused my mum to burst into tears．All at once，her sadness touched my deep heart．Since
then，I have completely changed myself．
Best wishes，
Daming．

Answer 1

分析 本题是一篇根据来信写回信的作文，格式是书信，但是前后文已经给出，所以格式不用注意了．根据Susan的来信内容可以知道，她是讲了令自己感动的一件事，并且要回答你有没有令你觉得很感动的"important gift"，所以回信主要是要说清楚自己收到的"important gift"，时态要以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称．

解答 Dear Susan，
  I'm glad to read your letter and your"important gift"really touches me．As for me，my"important gift"was my mum's sad tears．
  Two years ago，I became a"problem child"，and I was tired of everything．I did everything that was against my parents．That made my mum very sad，but she still loved me as usual．
  One night，I lost my reason and broke a glass，which caused my mum to burst into tears．All at once，her sadness touched my deep heart．Since then，I have completely changed myself．
  Best wishes，
Daming．

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出．本作文中给出的要点需要从来信中提取，因此动笔前先要认真阅读来信内容，然后围绕这些要点组织材料，确定写作内容，注意不要偏离文章中心．写作时注意准确运用一般过去时态，并且让上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．