Question

【题目】埃及千年神庙惊现中文涂鸦“丁 ××到此一游”。此事曝光后，引起国内外广泛关注，某国外英语网站就此发起讨论。请你以一名中国中学生（网名Whitecloud） 的身份，跟帖发表自己的看法。

要点提示：1.表明身份；2. 发表看法；3. 你的行动

要求：1. 词数：80词左右， 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Bluesky：“丁xx到此一游”。Appeared in the ancient temple in Egypt. It’s said ding

is a Chinese school student. That’s surprising. Maybe Ding will become known this

Whitecloud: I come from China

Answer 1

【答案】

Whitecloud: I come from China. I’m also a middle school student like Ding. When I read the news, my heart ached. What Ding did made me sad. Ding should feel sorry for that. As a student, it’s very important to care about what we do in public. For example, we’d better keep our voice down. I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. And I’m sure we Chinese will show our best to the whole world!

Sincerely yours,

【解析】

这篇短文要求以一名中国中学生（网名Whitecloud） 的身份，跟帖发表自己的看法。我们在写作时要注意：1. 注意时态，谈自己的感受用一般现在时，诉说丁的做法时，用一般过去时，谈论自己的想法和愿望时，用一般将来时。2. 要把提示内容全部写进去，避免生搬硬套。3. 要注意句式不要单一。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求写出了作者的身份，作者的看法和作者的行动。2.本文句式不单一，有it做形式主语的句子：I As a student, it’s very important to care about what we do in public. 一般将来时：I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things. 宾语从句：And I’m sure we Chinese will show our best to the whole world!