Question

6．回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象．请你以"What should we do in English class？"为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效．
提示：（1）Listen to the teacher．
     （2）Take part in activities．
     （3）Be confident in ourselves．
要求：（1）文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥．
      （2）文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名．
      （3）词数：60～80个．
参考词汇：take notes，work in groups with…，not be afraid of…
What should we do in English class？
In English class，we shouldlisten to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．Try to answer questions in English．
We should take part in all kinds of activities，like reading，writing，having discussions and playing games．We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other．
It's very important to be confident．Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes．In this way，we can make much progress．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"What should we do in English class？"为题谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）Listen to the teacher．听老师的．
 （2）Take part in activities．参加活动．
（3）Be confident in ourselves．相信自己．
常用到的重点短语：
take notes记笔记
try to do sth 尽力做某事
take part in 参加
learn from sb向某人学习
It's+adj+to do sth做某事是怎么样的 
be afraid of 害怕…
in this way用这种方法
make progress取得进步
高分句型：
In English class，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．
when necessary是一个省略句，完整说法是when it is necessary．当从句的主语是it谓语动词是be动词时，从句的谓语动词可省略．
It's very important to be confident．
It's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎么样的．其中it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．

解答 What should we do in English class？
In English class，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．（高分句型）Try to answer questions in English．（听老师的）
We should take part in all kinds of activities，like reading，writing，having discussions and playing games．（参加活动）We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other．
It's very important to be confident．（高分句型）Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes．（相信自己）In this way，we can make much progress．

点评 此为材料作文，要仔细审题，抓住重点，将所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，可使用一些表示顺序的词，使论述更明确，更有层次感．还要注意多使用一些委婉的提建议的句型，尽量使用不同的句型以避免文章枯燥单调．要求语句通顺，语法，词汇，时态正确，书写规范