Question

书面表达（共10分）

足够的睡眠时间对学生来讲很重要，然而调查显示，许多学生睡眠不足。请根据图示

内容，简要指出学生睡眠不足的原因并提出建议。

Reason:spend too much time…

Have bad sleeping habits…

Suggestions: keep away from…

not stay up…

Problem:

Having no enough sleeping time

要求：

1．要点齐全，并适当发挥，题目自拟。

2．词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

3．文章必须包含上述所有提示内容，除了上述给的提示，至少写出2条来改善学生睡眠的建议

提示词：reason 理由 keep away from 远离… stay up 熬夜 suggestion 建议

It’s impotant for students to have enough sleeping time.However…

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Answer 1

One possible version：

It's important for students to have enough sleeping time. However ,many of them don’ t have enough time to sleep．

There are different reasons for it．Some students often spend too much time on computer games so that they don’t go to bed early．Some students have bad sleeping habits．They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed．This makes them too excited to fall asleep .．

In order to get enough sleep ,we should keep away from computer games．We shouldn’t stay up too late . What’s more ,we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft music before we go to bed ,which can help us have a sound sleep．

In a word , if we make good use of time and form good habits , we’ll have enough sleeping time . Then we’ll be happier and healthier .

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文告诉我们：足够的睡眠时间对学生来讲很重要，然而调查显示，许多学生睡眠不足。要求大家请根据图示内容，简要指出学生睡眠不足的原因并提出建议。并且要点齐全，并适当发挥，题目自拟。词数80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文章必须包含上述所有提示内容，除了上述给的提示，至少写出2条来改善学生睡眠的建议。提示词：reason 理由 keep away from 远离… stay up 熬夜 suggestion 建议。

【亮点说明】这是一篇不错的作文。段落层次清楚，语言流畅，没有语法错误。开门见山，说明睡眠的重要，然而许多学生没有足够的睡眠时间。紧接着说明没有足够睡眠时间的原因是什么，并且说明怎样才能保证足够的睡眠时间。这样，有了足够的睡眠，才能过得健康幸福快乐！符合题目的要求，是一篇好作文。

考点：健康保健类短文。