题目内容
书面表达:( 10分)
在每个人的成长过程中或多或少会有一些改变,请以“How I’ve Changed!”为题写一段话,介绍一下你的过去与现在的不同。词数:60--80词左右。
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How I’ve changed!
My life on weekends has changed a lot in the past two years.You know I used to go shopping with my mother, and I played sports with friends on weekends.But now I have no time to play.I have to go to school on weekends because we have many classes all day.At night, I used to watch TV, read a newspaper or a magazine and I could also chat online.Now, I feel stressed out.I have to do lots of homework.Sometimes I have to study for the tests.It is boring.I really miss the old days
【解析】:
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文。要求以第一人称的方式叙述自己在过去和现在的学习生活的不同。主要用到两种时态:一般现在时和一般过去时态(uesd to do句式)。所给内容已经很是详细,只要注意句式结构正确,文章调理连贯就可以了。
【亮点说明】这篇短文短文通顺完整,表达清楚, 语言基本无误。能正确运用句式uesd to do的结构;I feel stressed out;I have to go to school on weekends because we have many classes all day,这些句子和短语也为文章增色不少,适当的运用了连词,使文章更紧凑。
考点:提纲作文