题目内容
【题目】书面表达(10分)
假设你是保护树木俱乐部(Trees Protection Club)的成员,一所学校邀请你为同学们做一次关于保护树木的演讲。你要向同学们说明树木的重要性并呼吁同学们爱惜树木、保护树木,节约木材资源。请根据以下要点写一篇不少于80字的演讲稿,可以作适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。
1.树木是我们的朋友,它们在很多方面给予我们帮助:
(1)净化空气,吸入有害气体,产生氧气……
(2)鸟类和动物的家园。
(3)生活中的很多东西来自于树木,它们使我们的生活更加便利。树木给我们提供食物和水果。
2.一些人没有意识到树木的重要性,乱砍乱伐树木,烧毁森林。
3.为了我们的未来,呼吁大家……
Boys and girls,
As we know, trees are our best friends.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】
Boys and girls,
As we know, trees are our best friends. They help us in many ways. First, trees are pollution fighters. They can keep the air clean and fresh, and they can take in harmful gases and produce oxygen. Second, trees are home to birds and animals. What’s more, many things in our daily lives come from trees, such as paper, tables and beds. They make our life more convenient. Trees also provide us with food and fruits.
But many people don’t know the importance of trees. They cut down lots of trees and burn the forest. There are fewer and fewer trees. Without trees, we can’t have a good life. To have a better future, we should plant more trees and take care of them. Let’s try our best!
Thank you for listening!
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们写一篇演讲稿,内容是关于保护树木的重要性。题目中给我们列出了提纲,内容非常详细,主要有三部分构成,一是告诉大家树木的重要性;二是提出问题,很多人没有意识到保护树木的重要性;最后呼吁大家一起保护树木。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过审题可知,这篇作文我们应主要使用一般现在时态,第三人称形式。要注意语法规范,如动词和名词的单复数形式,情态动词的用法等。另外还要使用一些连词、好的单词或短语和句型,使文章整体连贯、流畅。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的范文,首先这篇短文内容非常的充实,作者按照提纲的要求详细的阐述了保护树木的重要性;其次这篇短文结构非常完整,安排也很合理。整篇作文共分成三个部分,其中第一个部分占篇幅较长,是文章的一个中心,而第三部分呼吁大家共同保护树木比较简短。最后这篇短文中使用了较好的句式和短语,如As we know, trees are our best friends.、they can take in harmful gases and produce oxygen、What’s more, many things in our daily lives come from trees, such as paper, tables and beds、Trees also provide us with food and fruits.、To have a better future, we should plant more trees and take care of them.等。