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4．近日，《中国健康月刊》对全国1306 名15 岁以下学生进行了调查，发现40.74%的孩子有龋齿．为此，在全国牙齿关爱日到来前，请你根据以下要点，结合自己的体会，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，谈谈如何保护牙齿．
1．每天早晚刷牙；
2．有蛀牙及早看医生；
3．有龅牙可戴牙套；
4．健康饮食（蔬菜、水果…）．
注意：1．词数：80 词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2．应覆盖所有要点；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3．参考词汇：tooth decay 蛀牙；crooked teeth 龅牙； braces n．牙套．
Teeth problems are common among children．A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1，306Chinese students under age 15had decayed teeth．Teeth problems are common among children．A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1，306 Chinese students under age 15 had decayed teeth．Here are some ways to project your teeth．First，it's really necessary for you to brush your teeth twice a day at least-morning and night．Second，if you have tooth decay，you should go to the doctor's for help as soon as possible．Third，using braces is a wise choice if your teeth arc crooked．Finally，try to have a healthy diet taking more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food．In a word，if you care much about tooth health，you'll be better from tooth problems．．

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分析 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第二人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．

解答 Teeth problems are common among children．A study on China Health Monthly recently showed that 40.74% of 1，306 Chinese students under age 15 had decayed teeth．Here are some ways to project your teeth．First，it's really necessary for you to brush your teeth twice a day at least-morning and night．Second，if you have tooth decay，you should go to the doctor's for help as soon as possible．Third，using braces is a wise choice if your teeth arc crooked．Finally，try to have a healthy diet taking more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food．In a word，if you care much about tooth health，you'll be better from tooth problems．

点评 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．如：强调句式It is adj for sb to do sth，做某事对某人来说怎么样；as soon as一…就…；等．序数词first等的使用是本文看起来更加条理清楚，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．