Question

某英文报社就家务劳动（Housework）这一话题征文，请你投稿。
每个家庭都有很多家务，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在寒假为家里做什么。
根据以上提示，写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的短文。文章中请不要出现你的真实姓名。
参考词汇：every family ,  lots of housework ,  learn to do ,  help ,  parents , 
be\ feel proud of

Answer 1

Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of housework. I often help my parents do housework, such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and  watering  the flowers I think I’ve learned how to take care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself . And doing housework is also a kind of exercise. The winter holiday is coming .I’m going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them. 

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如lots of许多；such as例如；take care of关心，照顾等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。