Question

你是学校英文报的小记者李华。请给你校初三学生写一封公开信，就如何保持考前健康提出建议。主要内容如下：

(1)早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；

(2)饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；

(3)多做体育运动；

(4)你的其它建议。

Dear students，

As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to…

Best wishes and stay healthy．

Yours，

Li Hua

注意：1．词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；

2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear students，

As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to tell you how to keep healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

Best wishes and stay healthy．

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求写一篇如何保持考前健康的公开信。本文所给材料比较详细。写作中注意将所给要点介绍清楚，并提出自己的建议。结合材料可知本文主要是用第一人称进行叙述，时态为一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题及主谓一致问题。写作中注意使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。

考点：应用文写作

点评：此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。