Question

科技的发展改变了世界，请根据下列表格中的内容，以“Computers make our lives colorful.” 为题写一篇英语短文。

Name	Year	Country	Use	Feeling
Computer	1946	America	Help to work and study…	Helpful…

要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，正确使用标点符号，卷面整洁；2. 需用上所给提示内容；3．可适当拓展，词数70左右。短文开头已给出，不计入词的总数。

Computers make our lives colorful.

In our world, there have been a lot of inventions, such as computers.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Computers make our lives colorful

In our world, there have been a lot of inventions. Such as computers.

Computers are one kind of the most useful inventions of all. The first computer was developed in 1946 in America. Now every family has their own computers. People can do a lot of things on it, such as playing computer games, listening to music, watching movies and so on. It can also help us work and study, you can draw pictures or keep your telephone numbers on the computer instead of a phone book.

I think inventions make our lives colorful and easy. Without computers, I can’t imagine what life will be like.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，题中已经给出了写作题目，并给出了一些相关的信息。在写作时，要理清各写作要点，并重点突显出电脑在怎样丰富我们的生活，可以联系实际发挥想象。文中可适当使用连词，使文章更紧凑。

【亮点分析】文章要点周全，表述清晰，结构紧凑。文中使用了一些短语，如such as 例如；listening to music 听音乐；watching movies看电影； instead of而不是， 等等。此外，文中有一些很好的句型Computers are one kind of the most useful inventions of all.电脑是最有用的发明之一。Without computers, I can’t imagine what life will be like.没有电脑，我不能想象生活会怎么样。

考点：命题作文。