Question

11．近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注．请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法．
要求：（1）内容包括 ①列举中小学生面临的健康问题．
②请谈谈怎样才能保持健康．
（2）字数：60-80词．
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名．All of us want to be healthy．But most students in China have trouble keeping fit these years．Some students don't have enough time to sleep．Some don't have a healthy diet．A lot of students are too busy to do sports．They always have too much homework to do．
What should we do to keep healthy？Firstly，I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．Secondly，we should learn to relax．We can do sports every day，such as running and playing ball games．Thirdly，we should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food．Of course，there are also some other good ways to keep healthy．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是就中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注这个问题谈谈你的看法，写作内容要包括：列举中小学生面临的健康问题；谈谈怎样才能保持健康．由于是介绍当今的现象，故时态用一般现在时，介绍中小学生面临的健康问题时，人称用第三人称，谈自己的看法时，用第一人称来写．

解答 All of us want to be healthy．But most students in China have trouble keeping fit these years．Some students don't have enough time to sleep．Some don't have a healthy diet．A lot of students are too busy to do sports．They always have too much homework to do．
    What should we do to keep healthy？Firstly，I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．Secondly，we should learn to relax．We can do sports every day，such as running and playing ball games．Thirdly，we should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food．Of course，there are also some other good ways to keep healthy．

点评 本题是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，首先要注意审清主题，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．其次要注意行文间简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句，用熟悉的句子来表达．这里给大家提供一些例句和短语，以供参考．
短语：
have trouble doing  很麻烦做某事
have enough time  to do  有足够的时间做某事
a healthy/balance diet   健康/均衡的饮食
eight hours'sleep 八个小时的睡眠
try one's best to do 尽某人最大努力做某事
too…to…太…而不能…
句型：
A lot of students are too busy to do sports． 很多学生太忙了而没有时间参加体育活动．
I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．我认为我们每天需要八小时的睡眠．
We should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food．我们应该多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃快餐．