Question

【题目】书面表达。（本部分10分）。

假如你是David。你的表兄参军三年了，由于工作原因一直没能回家探亲，他很想知道这几年家乡的变化。请你给他写封信，告诉他家乡最近几年的发展和变化情况。

提示：1.下表列举的是你家乡近几年最有代表性的变化

2. 要包含表格内所有的信息,可以适当增加信息。

3. 可以参考第一部分的句子展开描写。

4. 要条理清晰，书写整洁，不少于60词。

	Changes	Time
people’s lives	be richer and richer	these days
new buildings	appear	already
our village	build a new road	last year
government	build three new schools send teachers from cities to help	since you left home
government	build a large hospital	next year

Dear brother ,

I haven't written to you for a long time, and how is everything going with you? Our hometown have changed a lot.

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Yours

David

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear brother ,

I haven't written to you for a long time, and how is everything going with you? Our hometown has changed a lot. Our lives have been richer and richer these days. Many new buildings have appeared already. Our village

built a new road last year and our government has built three new schools and sent teachers from cities to help teach since you left home. And our government will build a large hospital in our hometown next year.

Yours

David

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求按表格提示给哥哥写信，介绍家乡近年来所发生的变化，要求从人们的生活、新的建筑物、我们村庄、政府等方面进行写作。要尽量包含表格所提示的信息，并适当展开表达。描述已经发生的变化，用现在完成时态，描述过去所做的事，用一般过去时态，写将要做的事用一般将来时态，时态变化较多，要注意分析，准确把握。短文可以主要用第一人称形式。

写作亮点：短文按照提示要求，介绍了家乡近年来发生的变化，包含了表格所提示的所有信息，层次清楚，重点突出。短文写作的最大亮点就是时态的准确使用：短文用了现在完成时，表示政府已经做的事情，用了一般过去时描述去年所做的事，用了一般将来时介绍明年要做的事，用了现在完成进行时态描述近年来一直在发生的变化。