Question

以The changes in my hometown 为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍你家乡的变化。
1.当我很小的时候,我离开了我的家乡。现在我住在无锡。
2上周日,我去了我的家乡。我家乡过去是一个安静的地方，大多数人步行上班或上学。
3最近，我家乡已经发生了很大的变化。 许多人有了他们自己的小汽车，人们去城市更快更容易。
4 但是，水污染给人们已经引起了很多问题。我希望我的家乡将来会变得越来越美丽.

Answer 1

The changes in my hometown
When I was very young, I left my hometown. Now I live in Wuxi. （2分）Last Sunday I went to my hometown. It used to be a quiet place. (It was a quiet place in the past). Most people went to school or work on foot. (---walked to school or work.)（2分） My hometown has changed a lot recently. Many people have their own cars. It’s faster and easier for people to go to the city . （2分）Water pollution has caused many problems for people. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future.（2分）解析:

在写作时，注意语言点的把握，注意英语的语言表达。