Question

今天是星期日,是阴雨天,全家人都不能出门,但是大家在家里都过得很开心.于是你写一篇短文记下了正在发生的一切:爸爸正在和爷爷下象棋;奶奶正在看报纸;妈妈正在跟电视学习做菜;弟弟正在玩他心爱的玩具.字数60-70左右.

Answer 1

One possible version：
It is Sunday. It is a rainy day, so the whole family can not go out. But we are all having a good time at home.My father is playing chess with my grandpa. My grandma is reading a newspaper. My mom is learning how to cook with TV. My brother is having fun playing with his favorite toy. I am doing my homework in my room. We are very happy.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我和我的家人星期天正在做的事情。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查现在进行时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is ......；My father is.....；My grandma is .....及I am......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了星期天的天气，接下来介绍我们一家人正在做的事情，最后指出我们都很高兴。此处用了go out， having a good time， playing chess with，playing with及doing my homework等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。