Question

 

假如你是Paul，你想推荐你的同学John获得“最佳学生奖”，请你根据下面表格中的信息，写一封推荐信给你们的班主任王老师。

姓名	约翰（John）
学习情况	在7年级1班是最好的学生；擅长所有的科目
个人品质	友好；热于助人
特长及爱好	钢琴弹得好；爱读书；爱唱歌；喜欢体育运动
好人好事	经常帮助同学学习；上周帮助一位迷路的孩子找到家；昨天救了一位 落水儿童

 

要求：1要点完整,表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;

      2.不必逐句翻译,可适当发挥,但不可出现真实姓名、班级等;

      3.词数: 80个字 左右。（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数）

Dear Mr Wang

I would like to recommend John for this year’s Best Student Award.

 

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   If John can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you.

                                                                       Yours

                                                                        Paul

 

Answer 1

【答案】

：Dear Mr Wang

I would like to recommend John for this year’s Best Student Award. He is the best student in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at all his subjects and likes reading, singing and doing sports. He can also play the piano well. He is friendly and often helps the other students with their lessons. Last week, he saw a boy lose his way and helped him get back home. Yesterday he saved a child out of water.

If John can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you soon.

                                                                   Yours

                                                                    Paul

【解析】：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，尽量减少基本语法错误，注意人称和时态。