Question

【题目】书面表达

以My hometown为题, 写一篇70词左右的短文。要求语言通顺，意思连贯，可围绕主题适当发挥。

要点：1. 空气清新，路旁满是花草树木；镇中心有许多高楼；

2. 有超市，影院，中餐厅，西餐厅；可以购物，享受美食；

3. 每天有公共汽车去镇中心；我乘公共汽车上学，大约花费15分钟。

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Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown is a beautiful place.The air is fresh and clean.There are lots of trees and flowers on both sides of the road. And there are many tall buildings in the center of the town.There are also supermarkets,cinemas,Chinese restaurants and western restaurants.We can go shopping and share delicious food here.Every day,buses can go to the center of the town.I can take buses to school.It takes about 15 minutes to school.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如here are also supermarkets,cinemas,Chinese restaurants and western restaurants.We can go shopping and share delicious food here.等等。