Question

【题目】书面表达(满分15分)

根据以下提示，用英语写一篇60-80字左右的短文。文章的开头已给出。

1、旅游是一种非常好的活动。当你感到累了或空闲的时候，可以到外地欣赏自然景色，呼吸新鲜空气，也可交友，有益健康。

2、旅游前应做充分准备，需要了解天气情况。

3、最好不要独自一人旅游，和朋友在一起，可相互照顾，因为安全是最重要的。

Travelling is a very important activity．When you get tired of work，

Answer 1

【答案】 Traveling

Traveling is a very good activity. When you get tired of your work or study, and when you have free time, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature or other cities. You can breathe fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. It’s good for your health to do so.

But sometimes, traveling is not an enjoyable thing. For example, the weather can be changeable.

There may rain when you travel. You may catch a cold or be ill while traveling. The worst thing is that the thieves may steal your money. All these may happen to a tourist.

When you go on a trip, you must get everything ready. Firstly, you must have clear information about the weather. Secondly, ask a friend to go with you so that you can help each other. Thirdly, you must be careful everywhere and try not to cause accidents. If you do this, you will surely enjoy your travel.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用连接词Firstly、Secondly，以及Thirdly，使文章条理有序。还多次使用主从复合句，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。